Thursday, March 2, 2017

Kin of Cain: A Short Bernicia Tale by Matthew Harffy *Review*


FINALLY!!! a book that delivers. I am so tired of books with beautiful covers and great titles that just don’t quite reach my expectations. This one. This one was it.

Before we get into the nitty gritty of this review, I just have to say on a personal note, I seriously need to start reading more novellas. It really is the perfect length for a booklover with a busy life. When life’s got me running around I’d normally pick up an anthology, but this gave me new hope for the world of novellas. Thank you for that Mr. Harffy.

Onto what you came here for:


“Kin of Cain: A Short Bernicia Tale” is a historical fiction and the retelling of a very, veeeery old story. I’m not going to tell you which one, because that’s part of the fun.

We start this tale in the great hall, partying it up with all the kings horses and all the kings men (well…minus the horses). The celebration is interrupted by screams from outside. After a slight hesitation, everyone arms themselves, and then someone opens the door, and so a terrifying beast is introduced.

The creature is known by many names: Nightwalker, Kin of Cain, nihtgenga (I rather like this last one, though I have a hard time pronouncing it). It’s known by so many names, because no one knows what it actually is. All that is known is that its flesh cannot be penetrated by spear, and it has killed time and again, ripping livestock, women, and boys to shreds. And from the sounds of it, it only strikes at night.

With this night’s interruption, the king decides “NO MORE”, and he sends his 5 “best” warriors to hunt down the beast and kill it. And so the real story begins.


This, in my opinion, is the perfect beginnings for an epic bedtime story. This is also the point where most authors would have lost it. Things would go astray, start to get boring, and I would cry myself to sleep over all the potential lost. NOT THE CASE WITH “KIN OF CAIN”. Things just don’t let up (I know this statement is cliché, but it’s really true in the case of this story). There was never a point I found myself daydreaming about other books, because I was too dang enthralled with this one. Yes, it’s that good.

Now, with a book like this we all know there is more to it than just the storyline. The writing style is a biggun’ for me. Mr. Harffy shines in this aspect. The writing fits perfectly with the timeline and story, but it’s never over-the-top so that you can’t understand what’s going on. It’s subtle, beautiful, and descriptive, never getting in the way of the story itself.


On the same point as the writing, one negative aspect here and the only thing that drops this book from 5 to 4 stars, is that there were a few of the action scenes that were slowed by wordiness. These few sections gave me a little pause to try to figure out what was really going on. I think these sections could have been strengthened by being more cut and dry. Other than those few sections the writing style was spot on.

For those of you interested in characterizations (many times what makes a good story great), this story does a fantastic job of bringing the characters to life. We do get to know some characters better than others, but for such a short piece I was very well pleased in this aspect of the storytelling. I wanted to know more about some of the characters backgrounds, and I wish there were a book to give me that. This isn’t a negative comment in the slightest; I think it’s good to want more of the juicy bits.

As far as plot and story arcs go, there were times I thought I could see the writing on the wall, thinking things were going to get predictable, and then it took a turn in an all together great direction surprising me to my glee. This is what you want in a book like this. To be almost lulled into a sense of knowing what’s going to happen next, only to be thrust into shock and awe (Ok, maybe I’m being a bit overdramatic, but I was for sure surprised a time or two).

Stepping right over into genre, I love that I found this book in the historical fiction section. If you know a bit of history about the time this book is meant to be based in, you can tell that the author did his research. As I said earlier, this story is very readable to the people of today, but it also has subtleties revealing a world long behind us. This book is a reminder that it really was a different world back then. People looked at things differently than we do now, turning everything into a magical if frightening place.

Who do I suggest this story to? If you’re a fantasy, horror, or historical fiction lover then you’ll LOVE this novella, and you’ll get a kick out of the end as I did. Even if you don’t know the history behind the story, you’ll find that the author has got you covered with a brief history he has written. So hey, you might even just learn something while you’re at it.

Gah, who knew you could get such an epic story in such a small book? I’ll for sure be reading other books by this author.



Final rating? 4 out of 5 stars.

**I was given a copy of this book through Netgalley in exchange for an honest review**

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